This very question was put to me yesterday, when a certain WIP was making me want to stab my eyeballs out. It was a deep, dark, powerful, morbid story. And so not my thing.
And my husband texted me "Why So Serious?"
I got to thinking about it. It must have hit me at just the right moment, because it made things click over in my brain.
Why was I being so dark and depressing, and, well, so damn serious in this story? After all, the character was not known for her serious demeanor, that's not why I fell in love with this character, and have been trying to write her story for a while now.
She wasn't serious.
I needed to remember that.
Because even the best, most suspenseful stories don't have to be serious all the time. Especially with smart-mouthed characters.
I had lost my character, in the object of building up her world, I forgot who she was, and she'd become way more serious than necessary.
So I found an old short I'd written about her and never published, and re-read it. While some of the minor details had changed, it was still a perfect representation of who the character was.
And I remembered.
While "Why So Serious" is a catch phrase from The Dark Knight, I have a feeling, it will wind up being her catch phrase too.
Thanks Hubby. :)




1 comments:
I have the same experience. The WIP I'm working on started as a "freebie" for Samhain. I loved the smart mouth of my heroine and the attitude of my hero, but this story they're in is dark and serious, and I have to remember the same thing, Bette is a mob princess (runaway)and Alex is a FBI agent with a light-hearted attitude. It's difficult to keep them when so much bad is going on around them. That's something I actually worked on today--lightening up their dialogue while all hell has broken loose.
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